This is my first attempt at writing fiction in a long while. I hope you liked it. I would appreciate your constructive criticisms here, so that others learning to write can gain from your comments.
Wayne Dale Matthysse
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- Wayne
- Phnom Penh, Cambodia
- Co-Founder of Partners in Compassion Cambodia / Director of the Wat Opot Children's Community / Voice of The Society Of Harmony And Magnanimity, Creator of Photoetry Blog.
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2 comments:
It's a beautiful story. Thanks for writing and sharing it. I think it's a story of forgiveness, in a way, but not the kind of forgiveness we normally hear about (as what we "should" do). It's hopeful but not in the easy way that "hopeful" stories so often are. I'll read it again more slowly later.
Your books and stories are great, including this one and I will always enjoy them you are a great writer and very inspiriing. Next time though try a real fiction like a princess and a frog. Love you.
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